One day walking on the road load he met his old friend who studied with him at university. I think that time Dr.Watson didn't want to meet met his old friend because now he has a is limp, don't have job and don't have money. However he couldn't ignore ignored his old friend so, he chatted with his friend. During the conversation chatting Dr.Watson said he needed need flatmate and his friend said he knew someone who was looking for a flatmate. They set off for to meet met the man who was looking for a flatmate. The man was Sherlock Holme and that was their first meeting met.
They met in the lab. The moment they met They met that moment Sherlock asked to Dr.Watson 'Afghanistan or Iraq?'. I can't forget that scene. Dr.Watson shocked panicked by that question. Sherlock seems like already he knew everything about on Dr.Watson. At first time Dr.Watson doubted his old friend but he didn't said nothing to Sherlock.
They met in the '221 Baker street' and they looked around flat.
I think i should stop here. I'll continue tomorrow. I use too much my brain.
his old friend because now he is limp,(this is an injury that he has, so instead of "is" use "has a" instead.) don't (WF) have job and don't (WF) have money.
Yujin congratulations.... Your blog is really interesting.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you mean by "He is limp"?
In this TV Drama, does he need solve crimes? When did he start his first case?
Sherlock need a case because he has high function brain and he want to use that. Every time he faced difficult problem his feeling be happy.
DeleteI liked the way you finished your blog "I use too much my brain", this is really funny :) (You could also say, I've been thinking too much and my brain hurts).
ReplyDeleteInstead of "Starting of 'Sherlock' you should write "In the first episode of 'Sherlock'.
One day walking on the load (SPELLING) he met his old friend who studied with him at university. I think that time Dr.Watson didn't want to met (INFINITIVE) his old friend because now he is limp,(this is an injury that he has, so instead of "is" use "has a" instead.) don't (WF) have job and don't (WF) have money. However he couldn't ignored (INFINITIVE) his old friend so, he chatted with his friend. During the chatting (CONVERSATION) Dr.Watson said he need (PAST)flatmate and his friend said he knew someone who (BE VERB)looking for (A) flatmate. They set off for (TO) met (INFINITIVE) the man who (BE VERB) looking for (A) flatmate. The man was Sherlock Holmes and that was their first met (NOUN).
They met in the lab. (THE) moment (THEY MET) Sherlock asked Dr.Watson 'Afghanistan or Iraq?'. I can't forget that scene. Dr.Watson panicked (SHOCKED) by that question. Sherlock seems like already (HE) knew everything (ABOUT) Dr.Watson. At first time Dr.Watson doubted his old friend but he didn't said nothing to Sherlock.
They met in the '221 Baker street' and they looked around THE flat.
(Until) This story is about how they met (at)THE first time.
Could you tell me what is a diffirent of between chatting and conversation? 'Chatting' verb? 'conversation' noun?
DeletePlus could you tell me about WF on down below sentence?
'don't (WF) have job and don't (WF) have money.'
Sorry Yujin. WF means "Wrong Form" which means you have the correct word but it is in the wrong form. He don't have a job - don't is incorrect because of 3rd person singular (he, she, it).
ReplyDeleteHe doesn't or He didn't